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To Query an Agent or an Editor… That is the Question

Friday, June 11th, 2010

This is my last blog, and I’m going to say for now.  I still have hopes that some time in the future, we can bring Mama Writers back to current.  But until then, the community will still be open and all past posts by both Mama Writers and our guests will be available for your viewing pleasure. 

I’ve really enjoyed my time with Mama Writers, and getting to “talk” with all the readers of our site—readers/writers/authors alike.  It’s always fun to meet new people, and this place that we’ve created has been especially wonderful, because we all have so much in common.

For my last post, I wanted to talk about something that I myself had struggled with for a long time.  The age old writer’s question:  Who do you submit to first: an agent or an editor?

I’d asked myself this same question for YEARS.  Now if you’re asking yourself this question, I think you also need to ask yourself where you see your career going.  (Ugh, did you notice I wrote some form of “you” six times in that last sentence? Lol—internal editor)

Do you want to be an e-pubbed author or a small press author?  Do you want to write and be published with a larger house?  Mass-market or trade paperback?  Hardcover?

Once you’ve established that answer, then I think you can work on the original question.  If you plan to work exclusively for an e-pub or small pub, I don’t think it is all that important to have an agent, and honestly, it would be hard to find one.  Why?  Agents don’t get paid until you do, and typically smaller houses will not give an advance, which means your agent would have to get paid a year or so down the road after you’ve signed a publishing contract and your book has been published and royalties start coming in—and even then it wouldn’t be that much, because you’re only getting quarterly (sometimes monthly) royalties.  Now, I’m not saying authors of small prints don’t make decent money, because they do.  But unless you’re established, it will be hard to find an agent who is willing to take you on for only small press publishing.  (Kudos to you and your agent if you found each other!)

Most authors published in traditional print houses have an agent, and their advice to you will be: get an agent.

I’d been hearing that particular piece of advice for years, and believe me I tried!  I wrote a book, and subbed it to over 20 agents who all politely (and some not so politely) rejected the book.  In the meantime, I kept writing, kept querying.  And I have to tell you, querying is my least favorite part of the whole writing process.  I’m a story teller.  I write, I create worlds, I don’t know how to sell myself.  Well, you learn real quick how to do that!  But just because you learn doesn’t mean you want to do it.

So, I queried to agents, kept getting rejected and started querying to editors at NY pubs.  While I received a lot of requests for fulls from the editors, and even an “almost contract” that fell through, I was still getting rejections.  I won’t say that I gave up, but I was close.  I remember sending an email to a few of my mama writers (eggplants), saying I was just going to throw my manuscript in the trash.  But that’s what friends are for, and they encouraged me to keep on trucking, and I’m glad I did.

Recently I found an agent (or the other way around really…) who is a perfect fit for me and she offered me a contract.  Imagine my relief when I sent her my finished book and SHE sent it out to editors!  It was the best feeling in the world, now I can concentrate on doing what I do best: writing. 

As for still having to sell myself, sure if my books are picked up I’ll have to do promo, but promoting your finished work is so much different than querying to an agent/editor.  When you’re promoting your work, you already know that people like it—you’ve gotten a contract right?  There will be critics who don’t like your work, but for as many that don’t there will be two or more who do!

So in this entire jumbled mess of a post… my advice?  If you want to be published with a big pub—or NY pub, as they call it—get an agent.  Make a tiered list of about 10 agents on each:  A List, B List, C List, D List.  Send out queries to the A list, wait until you’ve received answers from everyone on that list before moving to the next, and so on. Do your research—the one thing agents will tell you they despise the most, is when they receive a generic query from someone who obviously didn’t bother to find out more about their company.  They won’t pick you up if they don’t “feel” you.

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 Eliza Knight is the multi-published author of sizzling historical romance and erotic romance. While not reading, writing or researching for her latest book, she chases after her three children. In her spare time (if there is such a thing…) she likes daydreaming, wine-tasting, traveling, hiking, staring at the stars, watching movies, shopping and visiting with family and friends. She lives atop a small mountain, and enjoys cold winter nights when she can curl up in front of a roaring fire with her own knight in shining armor.

Take if Off, Warrior, available now from Ellora’s Cave! 

 *Warning: this is an erotic romance, and not intended for those under the age of 18.*

Sixteenth-century Highland laird Camden MacLeod wakes up in the modern world. Confused with his surroundings, he haphazardly throws on his kilt and goes in search of whoever has played such a foul trick on him. What he finds instead is beyond tempting…

Valerie is thoroughly exploring the medieval Scottish castle she’s rented for her best friend’s bachelorette party. Not only does an oddly shaped stone in tower catch her fancy—it somehow brings her dream man to life.

Review Diana of Naughty Editions: “A thoroughly delightful time-travel romance filled with deliciously sexy romps and quirky humor. Ms. Knight’s hunky Scottish warrior, Camden, tickles the funny bone with amusing observations of modern day garments and amenities…The bond between Camden and Valerie was magical and nicely portrayed in their tender yet deeply erotic love scenes. This is a story worth a read and than a re-read.”

Read an excerpt here:  http://www.jasminejade.com/pm-8417-642-take-it-off-warrior.aspx

PLOTTERS VS. PANTSERS

Monday, August 31st, 2009

PLOTTERS VS. PANTSERS–a fun look at both sides of the issue from Eliza Knight and Renee Knowles…

The Plotter

by Eliza Knight

Plotting? Pantsing?

They both sound uncomfortable, and for those who have a preference, one can be quite painful. I’ve tried both and come to the conclusion I am a plotter, through and through. If I can’t be in control it makes me squirm! Probably part of my majorly Type A personality…

Today I thought I’d take you through my experience with the pantsing so you can see how painful it was for this here control freak to let go, (and secretly see why I think pansters are crazy! Just kidding…lol)

Monday 8:30am – wait! Scratch that I’m pantsing, make it 8:37…

They say pantsters fly by the seat of their pants, I’ve got my basic character sketches, and I’m hoping that my fingers will soar across the keyboard.

8:39am…Not so bad. I’ve written a whole paragraph.

8:41am…I’m starting to sweat. I want to know exactly what is going to happen…

8:45am…Biting nails and rapidly tapping foot. I’m only one sentence past my initial paragraph.

8:47am…I’ve ripped off my pants and tossed the computer! I can’t take it! I must plot my story from beginning to end, and while I do allow for some minor changes and character drivenness, I just can’t handle not knowing anything…

Seriously though, I have tried pantsing. It’s actually how I first started writing, and two years later I’d finished two novels. BUT, one of them I had to rewrite literally 6 times—doing the math on a 95K manuscript, that means I really wrote 570,000 words for one novel!!! The second novel was only 50K, and I’ve re-written it once, and tossed it into the deepest darkest corner of my hard-drive for a day I have more time.

For some, they don’t mind the rewrites, or maybe they are even blessed enough to pants it and get everything down in at least one or two shots, but not me, and I’m not talking just edits, we all do those.

Now I plot meticulously. I have my character sketches, my synopsis and my chapter outlines done before I start writing. Of course it’s not set in stone and I do make changes, but I’ve found with the way I plot, there are NO rewrites, and I only have to edit each chapter 2 maybe 3 times before I’m satisfied.

I hope you pansters find the humor in my teasing, and I hope you plotters feel like you’re not alone!!!

Cheers!

Eliza

The Pantser

Hello, plotters–this is how the other half lives!

by Renee Knowles

Eliza told you about the pain she endured trying to be a pantser. Oh, what she’s suffered. :)

I have to admit that I have suffered too. For a long time I was sure something must be wrong with me. It seemed every writer I knew was telling me about a new plotting system. One would advise me about how to make up a 60-page outline for a 250-page book. Another one just took a class at their RWA chapter and learned an entirely new system for plotting—she gave me books and worksheets and character charts. Some of which made great scrap paper for my grocery lists.

Don’t get me wrong. All these writer friends had the best of intentions. And I appreciated every one of them. But these systems confounded me. I would sit there staring at them blankly waiting for the same inspiration to strike me that my fellow writers were feeling. What was wrong with me? I wondered. What writing gene was I missing that everyone else seemed to have in spades? How on earth was I supposed to know all this?

That was it, I decided. I was defective. I’d never make it as a writer. I was doomed to simply sit on the sidelines as I had in gym class throughout middle school.

Then one day I gave up. I cleared my desk of all the plotting clutter. And I just began to write.

Viola! The words flowed from me. Heck, it was almost as if a dam had broken loose. This book became my first published book, Going Topless.

I realized I was a “pantser.” (Aha! There is even a name for it!) And the realization allowed me to finally relax and let the story play itself out. It was a revelation. An awakening. At least for me, “pantsing” is the only way to inspire my muse.

And I’ve never had cause to look back.

Hugs,

Renee

Bios:

Eliza Knight

Eliza is the author of multiple sizzling historical romances and Highlander time travel erotic romance novellas published by The Wild Rose Press. She is a freelance copy editor, Newsletter Editor for Hearts Through History Romance Writers, and President of the Celtic Hearts Romance Writers. Eliza is the author of the award-winning blog, History Undressed and has published numerous articles in various newsletters. She presents workshops on history, researching techniques and writing craft, to writing groups online. Visit Eliza: www.elizaknight.com, www.historyundressed.blogspot.com

Renee Knowles

Renee Knowles is an award-winning contemporary and historical romance author. She is also the author of the writing how-to series SAVVY BUSINESS SKILLS FOR WRITERS, covering everything from career planning to networking and promoting on a budget to no-fear public speaking. Available now at Wild Child Publishing. Check out Renee’s website at www.reneeknowles.com.

I’ve Got Spring Fever

Thursday, April 23rd, 2009

springSpring is here!  I know…it’s been here for a month, but it hasn’t actually been here until recently.  I mean, now we can see flowers in our garden and it’s warm enough to open the windows, wear t-shirts some days, and I’ve broken out the flip-flops too.

 

Along with spring weather, comes spring cleaning, spring recipes, playing outside, and I inevitably begin to avoid working.  Sometimes I’m the one begging the kids to play outside—despite my extreme allergies to pollen.  Anyone with me? 

 

So how am I dealing with this spring fever of mine?  I’ve created a new schedule.  I wake up around 6am, take care of hygiene etc… get my kids up around 7am get them hygienated (yes I just made up that word), and out the door by 8am.  Then I check my email, eat breakfast drink coffee and begin some easy work like looking something up, posting things, etc…At 9am, its time to begin my chores/errands (and I do include walking the dog in there)—and I do them for 2 hours.  By 11am, chores are done for the day.  That way, I can spend the rest of my day playing with the kids and/or working.  I used to try to work in the morning and do chores in the afternoon, but by then I just wanted to chillax (new teen lingo) and my chores were never getting done.   I like working so if the afternoon rolls around, I don’t mind attaching myself to the computer for some writing or teaching.

 

It also helps that on my planner I write down my weekly writing/chores goals—and I mean I get nitty gritty, like how many loads of laundry I want to do, making a phone call, how many words I want to write.  I cross them off as the days go by.  If you don’t write down what you hope to accomplish, even if your goals are limited or outrageous, it’s hard to remember what you wanted to do.  I don’t always finish everything, but I sure do love crossing stuff off, so it really helps to see them in front of my face.

 

I stop playing and/or working at 6pm for good, that’s when I make dinner.  By 7, we eat, and by 8pm, I put my kiddies to bed and then I relax until bedtime with my hubby.  This new schedule has really made a huge difference.  My house is cleaner, errands are run, work is actually getting completed, and I feel like I have a lot more free time.  My kids are happier that I’m spending more time with them, as is the hubby.

 

I’m hoping this schedule sticks through summer, if not I’m not sure what I’ll do.  I usually don’t work as much during the summer, because with kids out of school it is hard to get in a lot of time for work.  On a regular given day, I probably get in 4-6 hours of work time, but during the summer it’s probably more like 1-2. 

 

So, what are your schedules like?  Are you trying to become more structured now that the warm weather is luring you outdoors?

 

I’ll leave you with this delicious—and wonderfully low-fat—dessert I made last week that the family loved!

 

Fruit Shortcake

 

Makes 9 servings

 

Cake-

½ stick of butter or margarine (melted)

¼ cup of sugar

2 1/3 cup of Bisquick mix

½ cup of skim milk

Fruit Topping-

 

(You can use either fresh or frozen—but make sure they are thawed)

 

1 cup of blueberries

1 cups of sliced peaches

2 cups of sliced strawberries

¼ cup granulated sugar

Frozen Cool Whip (comes in low fat) – thawed

 

Earlier in the day, I like to combine the fruit and the sugar together in a Tupperware and place in the fridge, stirring every hour or so.  When you’re ready for dessert — preheat oven to 425º.  Mix cake ingredients together and drop spoonfuls onto ungreased cookie sheet (should make 9 cakes).  Bake for 10-15 minutes.

 

While still warm, top with fruit topping and a dollop of whipped cream.  Enjoy!!!

 

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Eliza Knight

Eliza Knight

 

Eliza Knight is the author of sizzling historical romance and erotic time-travel romance.  She is also the author of the award winning blog, History Undressed.  She presents various online workshops on research, writing craft, and history. While not waddling (preggers) after her two children, she is cuddling up with her hubby.

Visit Eliza at www.elizaknight.com or www.historyundressed.blogspot.com

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4 Books!  “From the very beginning, the captivating characters stole my breath. The tug between undeniable love and fear of lose is overwhelming. On more than one occasion I found my hand flying to my mouth and being swamped by feelings so strong the story could have been happening to me. The lengths Corinne and Ryder go to for love leaves me speechless.

This is definitely a story I would read more than once. Ms Knight has done a fantastic job and I look forward to reading many more of her works.” ~ Wisteria, The Long and Short of It Reviews

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What is S-E-X?

Friday, April 3rd, 2009

Eliza Knight

Eliza Knight

Today is release day for me!  The third and final story in my Highland Jewel Series, Love In A Box, released today with The Wild Rose Press.

 

 

Now that I’ve shouted my news, I’ll move onto today’s blog…

 

Sex.  What is sex?  What does S-E-X mean?

 

Dear Lord help me!  I got the question last week in the car on the way to drop off my eight-year-old at school.  So here’s what happened, they said “sex” on the radio.  DD#1 pipes up, “they said a bad word!” I was very confused, I hadn’t heard any of the usual bad words, you know, shut-up, stupid, heck J but then again I was kind of in my own little world, which isn’t unusual for me…

 

“I didn’t hear a bad word.”

 

“They said, S-E-X.”

 

Oh no!

 

“That’s not a bad word, sweetie.”

 

“It’s not?  What does it mean?”

 

Cue my lips to clamp shut, heart to palpitate…I am not prepared for this.  What do I say?  We’re almost to her school.  Oh, heck!  Stupid radio, they should shut up!

 

“Well, since we’re almost to school, how about we talk about it when you get home today?”

 

She agreed, but she never asked me when she got home, and I of course haven’t got the B-A-L-L-Ss to bring it up.  Despite the fact that I’m a romance author, I talk openly about S-E-X with my hubby and friends, I shut-down when asked by my little angel.  I’ve had eight years to prepare, but I’m a total wimp!  I know, I know, I need to get over it and talk to her about it, but I’m so nervous.  I don’t want to say the wrong thing.  I want her to know that sex is a healthy thing between two adults who love each other (preferably married, but I am realistic too.) 

 

I need advice!  I know this is going to come up again, and soon.   I’m actually surprised since I’m pregnant she hasn’t asked how the baby got in there.  Maybe she already knows and she was just placating me.

 

Have any of you had this discussion yet?

 

And since we’re on the topic of sex, I’d like to know how you feel about writing and reading sex scenes.  I am very open about it.  I’ll read just about anything (as long as it doesn’t depict depravity and anything illegal of course.)  And anyone who’s read my work knows my scenes go from sizzling hot to erotic.  For me writing a sex scene is at first mechanical.  I know how it plays out in my head and I write the bare bones of it (pun intended *wink*).  Then I go back and add in all the emotion, how I want the story to progress from this love scene, what it means to my characters.  To me the sex means something, even if it’s a quickie.

 

I feel the same way when I’m reading.  I love a hot sex scene, but I always look for the deeper meaning.  I do occasionally appreciate the gratuitous hook-up, but I’m still looking to see how the characters grow and change from it.  Does their relationship progress or regress? 

 

So tell me your thoughts?  What does sex in romance writing/reading mean to you?

 

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If you are a fan of my highlander erotic time travels, here is the blurb for Love In A Box, and if you answer my question correctly, you could win an e-book copy!!!

 

loveinabox_w3645_300Colin MacDuff has grown up learning the ways of Highland warriors from his father Donell–but he’s never believed his parent’s fanciful stories of time travel, true love and a brooch known as the Highland Jewel.  Until…he lands on his butt, literally, in the year 1648. Before him is the most beautiful, not to mention sexy as hell, woman he’s ever seen.  The only thing is, she refuses to be his, or to believe in the power of the brooch.

 

Sera wishes she’d been able to escape the Highlands like her sister did, and vows she won’t marry for anything less than love, and refuses to be a pawn in a marriage deal.  Until…Colin shows her what she’s missing.  He takes her body to the heights of heaven and back, all while proving to her that true love is possible.

 

Now everything and everyone, depends on the future of these two lovers. Will Colin stay in the past to save the future, and will Sera succumb to passion and love?

 

Here’s the question for your chance to win!

 

In an interview with the hero from Warrior In A Box, Donell reveals his favorite food.  What is it?

 

 

Cheers!

Eliza

 

Eliza Knight is the author of sizzling historical romance and time travel erotic romance. She is also the author of the award winning blog, History Undressed. She teaches various workshops on writing craft and history. Visit Eliza at www.elizaknight.com or www.historyundressed.blogspot.com

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