How much of yourself do you put into your writing? How much of other people to do you jot out onto the pages? Do you take real life conflicts you’ve had and work them into your stories? Other people’s problems you’ve witnessed?
I never realized how much of myself went into my stories until my husband read several and said the heroine’s were all me. There were little differences, quirks and nuances, hair coloring, hobbies, likes and dislikes, but beyond those, he could see me.
You’ve heard that funny threat before that writers often use, “Don’t piss me off or you’ll end up in my next book!” So tell me have you ever done this?
A previous job I had, my boss was a terrible, manipulative, passive aggressive woman. More often than not, she would take credit for work I completed, and I just hated her! Anyways… she ended up in a book
I couldn’t help it. The character I was creating was so like her, and then I realized, it was because it was her.
Think about places you’ve been, do you use what you see, smell, hear in your stories? I know that having been to Ireland and smelling the peat fires, seeing the sheep dotting the hills, climbing the stairs of a ruined castle, has helped me to capture the essence of history in my stories. But even if you can’t get to the world your story takes place in, there is always Google Earth and Internet searches! I think one thing that we as writers must do to capture our settings and our characters is to really immerse ourselves. Your character loves to cook lets say, you better get some cookbooks, watch some cooking shows, spend time at the grocery store, COOK, and really appreciate all your character loves, so your reader can grasp the reality of it, feel the love of cooking leap off the page.
Your character is a secret agent lets say… visit a spy museum, interview a retired agent, read non-fiction about it. Break out the nerf guns and play spy with your kids! Hey, I do it! Dragging your family into your research can be a lot of fun. We visit a lot of places, we have interesting conversations. Mom’s off in her own little world sometimes, but they have a blast with it!
Your character’s favorite scent is orange blossom, well guess what, you have to know what it smells like right?
In other words… Even if you write historical, future, sci-fi, fantasy, thriller, whatever, that doesn’t mean you can’t immerse yourself in your own setting and hang out with your own characters–it just might take a little more. Art imitates life. Sure of it is made up fantastical stuff. Its not like I can really go back in time and observe everyday people, but I can do the next best thing. As writers, we have to take life, this big blob of just about everything, and pluck a little this, a little that, a whole lot of this, and even more of that, toss it in a bowl, mix it around, chuck the boring stuff, and Voila! A fun story readers can engage in!
Question, sort of like the chicken and the egg… What comes first, art imitating life, or life imitating art?
How do you breathe life into your characters and your stories?
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Eliza Knight is the author of sizzling historical romance and erotic romance. Visit Eliza at www.elizaknight.com
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Twitter: silverwriter
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Eliza, if I told you that, I’d have to kill you. LOL!
Yes. I’m guilty. I swear I’m going to buy that tee shirt. And wear it! I watch people when I’m out. I eavesdrop on their conversations. I put them in my books.
In many ways, my characters (at least the MCs) are my children. Just like The Only has 1/2 of my genes, I figured my MCs get some of their genetic code from me, too. This includes the heroes. (Yay for being a tomboy!) I grew up with weapons. I married a military man. I’ve been in all sorts of perilous situations in my various careers. I like to think my experiences lend realism to my writing. Come to think of it, I don’t think I’ve ever had a “girly-girl” heroine. Hrmmmmm. That could be a challenge.
Great topic today and lots of food for thought… *wanders off, lost in thought*
lol, don’t tell me! That would be a challenge… I think you should try it, and since its so different than you, I bet people would have some serious questions
Twitter: janetlane
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Hi, Eliza,
Fascinating topic. I wrote a women’s fiction novel (that came ‘this’ close to being published, gotta try some more) that was focused on my wildly dysfunctional family. Names changed to protect the guilty, LOL. For the historical romance I just finished, I used Google Earth, and was able to look at the specific battlefield about which I was writing. The technology is absolutely amazing. I, too, have traveled to places where my novel is set. I once dragged my husband across the pond to specific locations in Somerset. But with such tools as Google Earth, we needn’t be deprived of immersing ourselves in our settings. If you get the go-back-in-time issue solved, let me know – maybe we can get a group discount.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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You know, that whole “go back in time” thing… I think we’re approaching an interesting option to that. If anyone has visited Second Life or any of the other 3D virtual world programs, there are a lot of historical worlds being created in places like that.
There is one website, called Heritage Key that has taken the technology and created historical places from it, like Stonehenge. http://heritage-key.com/about-heritage-key
This page has a directory: http://heritage-key.com/directory of sites, and at the bottom right now, has an ad that says “Experience life in Britain’s Bronze Age…”
It’s not as sensory as the real thing, but it’s definitely a way to connect a little more.
Google Earth is amazing! I just love it!
As for traveling back in time…. I’ll keep you posted!
Jeannie, those sound very interesting!
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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“Your character loves to cook lets say, you better get some cookbooks, watch some cooking shows, spend time at the grocery store, COOK, and really appreciate all your character loves, so your reader can grasp the reality of it, feel the love of cooking leap off the page.”
Well, I’m pretty certain we all know that none of my characters will love to cook then… LOL (Just kidding.) But if I ever do write a character who loves to cook, I would absolutely do the same research as with anything else I don’t understand.
I was at a Donald Maass (who I call the Uber Agent) workshop and he was talking about settings and making them come alive by not just noting details, colors, sounds, etc but really making them relevant by the character’s opinions of their surroundings. I think it’s very much the same — in order for something to feel authentic and connect with you, there needs to be an understanding of how it’s personal to the character. Be it cooking, scenery, whatever.
Oh and yes, I totally eavesdrop. I’m bad that way.
Thankfully they don’t require us to wear “I’m a writer and I WILL eavesdrop on your conversation.” t-shirts.
I think I’d like to have that shirt! Then when you where it smile at people who in really intense conversations, and you know they can’t leave, because lets say they are at a restaurant in the middle of a meal, lol, what a devious plan!!! And you’re right, things have to matter to our characters. Even though they aren’t real, they have to come alive.
Great subject, Eliza! I have a personal suspicion that writers ALWAYS put a little of themselves in their characters. I don’t think we can help it. It comes from spending so much time in each other’s heads!
~ Melissa
So true Melissa!
Twitter: violaestrella
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Hi Eliza,
I don’t think I’ve ever fashioned a character solely on one person, but sometimes bits and pieces of different people I’ve known will mysteriously appear in a character or two. It’s funny when we don’t even realize we’re doing it, right?
It is funny! And since there are bits and pieces that one person might go, huh, is this me, oh no, I don’t do that, and you can secretly smile, lol
Oh, fun post, Eliza!
I’ve taunted many with that threat! Too funny! My heroine is a mixture of every leading lady I have ever liked. I did give my gal a few of my favorite past times like hunting and fishing as hobbies. I was a tomboy and so is she. It’s been a real joy developing her character. I hope I succeed in creating a heroine that appeals to readers. *crossing fingers and toes!* LOL
I think you will! if she’s a combo of your favs, then you’re sure to grab the readers’ attention, you’ve built the perfect woman!
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Hmm… I’m w/ Jeannie: my heroes and heroines HATE to cook, poor things. I mean, I’d love to cook fancy meals every night to help immerse myself in them, but, sigh, they don’t want me to, so it’s a sacrifice I’m willing to make.
Great topic!
My hubby read my post and he was like, no, you can’t make your heroine love cooking, thats not romantic… lol