. . . Hooking READERS, that is! (what did you think I meant?!) *wink wink*
The components of a romance novel are by no means static. Now days, heroes are more heroic and heroines are made of decidedly sterner stuff. Writing is more active and the love scenes are hot enough to singe a gal’s eyebrows.
Amdist all the evolution there is one factor that has remained the same . . . delivering up a hook strong enough to keep a reader coming back for more.
The question on every writer’s mind is: HOW?
During a recent trip to the grocery store (sans kids), I shimmied on over to the book rack to do a little “research”. The world was my oyster at this point! I didn’t have two kids squawking and squalling in a cart to rain on my parade.
I scanned the first pages of six Regency Historicals and was pleasantly surprised with the findings. Some relied on a clever situation to snare my attention while others used the “grab-ya-by-the *bleep*” kind of first line.
The one I bought? I couldn’t resist one of the intriguing first scenes. Although, I will say some of those hum-dinger lines were pretty hard to pass up! Easy to see why those gals get the big shopping money!
So, what’s the magic equation to writing a killer first line? Does such a thing exhist?
Maybe I’m not the one to answer that question. After all, I still believe there are little elves stuffed in a tree somewhere out making all those yummy chocolate covered cookies just for me! lol
I think if someone were to solve this age old riddle, they’d be ga-zillionaires. Bigger than Oprah. Seriously!
The bottom line is: Every writer should know what it is about their genre that appeals to the traget audience. The easiest way to do this is to read A LOT! Call it research, that’s what I do. Ha! If only learning about the Kreb’s Cycle and Glycolytic Pathways had been this fun!
Besides reading, a writer needs to make a diligent effort to spend the time with their booty planted in the chair! Learning craft is only half of the battle. Application is other.
The same principle applies to motherhood. Sure, I read every single pregnancy book in print, but no amount of research prepared me for a newborn who didn’t get the memo on how she was supposed to act. Confusing? Yes. Daunting? A little. Insurmountable? NO.
We’re moms! There isn’t much we can’t do. Shoot, just look at what a little “mommy-spit” on a Kleenex can do for a grubby face! After surviving motherhood, “hooking” can’t be all that hard!
What about you? What kind of “hooker” are you? Do you have any insight to share on how to snag a reader’s attention? Better yet, what snags your attention?
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Great subject! The title was definitely a hook!
In my writing, I normally have a hook on the first page. I don’t plan it (I’m a panster), it just comes out that way.
My favorite hook that I have read recently was in Cynthia Eden’s book Hotter After Midnight. The first line: “The vampire on her couch had a serious blood phobia.” How can you put a book down that starts like that?
I’m more of the cliffhanger type hooker. Leave somebody in the middle of something and they can’t help but read on just so they find out how it ends. People don’t like stopping in the middle.
The only books I can think of right now are the Kate Daniels series by Ilona Andrews. They have great lines and wonderful action. (Sorry I loaned my books to a friend so I can’t give any examples)
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Sarah~
That’s a great tips, to research our own subgenre to see what appears to be working for other authors. Some genres are more action-packed, some more character-oriented: it’s good to know.
But really, what caught my attention about your post was the image of you being at the grocery store alone, kids well tended and happy for the moment *with someone else*, and you getting to take your time looking through books. That’s a really good hook. I’ll buy it.
Thanks, Tammy!
I agree, that is a catchy first line! It would definitely make me keep reading.
Hi Beth!,
I like those cliffhangers, too. Typically, I’ll give a book the benefit of the doubt for at least three chapters. I enjoy reading different styles and voices. I don’t think I would have done that before I started writing. I would have moved on to the next one without a backward glance. I’m glad I learned how hard it is to write. I appreciate the efforts of others more.
Hi Kris!
I was so lucky to get this post in. I had surgery yesterday to have my gallbladder out and worried that it would have problems posting. Nice to see it went off without a hitch!
I had a rough day afterward, but now I’m feeling better.
In fact, it was while I was doing a quick trip to the store to stock up for my “downtime” that I got to do the browsing. I did enjoy the peace and quiet. Talk about a few minutes in heaven! Ha! Now, if my hubby reads this post, he’ll know that the lines weren’t really all that long after all! LOL
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Sarah, you’re hilarious. No, hookin’ ain’t easy, that’s for sure. LOL
Great advice!
Wait a minute…. you mean Ernie and the Keebler elves aren’t real?
( Then who makes those yummy cookies, huh? Next you’ll tell me there’s no Tooth Fairy!
LOL
I’m a huge believer in starting with the day that was different–or the moment, or second in time that everything changes in a character’s life. I love dialog as an opening, especially if it’s a catchy line. If it’s done well, you get a real feel for the character or situation right away.
I’m a big believer in the “microwave mentality” most people have now and try to get to the “good stuff” as quickly as possible. I’m not nearly as patient as you, LOL, I give an author about three paragraphs to grab me. If she hasn’t done it by then–I move on, LOL.
So glad the surgery went well and you’re doing better!
Hugs!