MamaWriters are excited to have Kimberly Killion here today, celebrating her latest release, HIGHLAND DRAGON. RITA® nominee and award-winning author, Kimberly Killion writes sexy medieval romances for Zebra Books and has captivated readers with her adventurous stories.
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Hello MamaWriters!!!
Thanks so much for having me on the blog today. After much debate, I finally settled on a topic: KIDS IN ROMANCE NOVELS.
You gotta love ‘em. They are the glue that binds love and laughter together. I don’t think I’ve written a book yet that didn’t have a handful of young characters. And let’s face it, the majority of women reading romance probably have kids and can relate one way or another to the chaos they bring into our lives.
So while researching HIGHLAND DRAGON, I decided I needed a crux for my heroine, Akira. She loves children. She wants a dozen of her own. Of course, Calin is eager to get started fulfilling that wish ASAP. Bluidy Scots are all horny. ![]()
Without a doubt, the hero and heroine play the leading role, but sometimes I enjoy my secondary characters even more. So let me introduce you to Andrew…
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[EXCERPT from HIGHLAND DRAGON]
The incessant skirling of bagpipes was soon drowned out by the high-pitched screams of a brood of children racing for Akira’s skirt. Five in all, each one taller than the next, skirmished around her kirtle staring at her with anxious interest. Beneath the fighting elbows came a crop of pale blond hair that
framed the sweet cherub face of a little boy with giant blue eyes.
He raised his arms to Akira. “Choose me, m’lady.”
Not caring about the propriety of her new status, she bent to lift the young boy. Before she could stop him, he stretched his chubby arms around her neck, latched his fingers together, and embraced her with an affectionate hug.
“Welcome home, m’lady.” His sweet voice rang in her ear.
Her heart nearly exploded from the little innocent’s greeting. Her vision blurred with tears and a lump formed in her throat. This little boy could never know how powerful his words were. She refused to cry. Instead, she unveiled the smile she was determined not to share with Calin. She turned, knowing he studied her face. He seemed to want her approval. Had he granted her another day, she may have willingly given him that approval. As it stood, she decided to be stubborn and a wee bit selfish with her merriment. But the sweetling clutching her neck made being dismal difficult.
Alec, and a woman Akira guessed was Alec’s wife, Aileen, scurried after their children. Red-gold locks fell over her face when Aileen bowed. “A thousand pardons, m’lady. They dinnae know their manners.” Aileen attempted to peel the boy from Akira’s neck.
He wouldn’t let go. Wrinkling his nose, he gave his mother a sour expression and tightened his grasp.
Aileen apologized repeatedly. “Andrew, release m’lady this instant.”
“I cannae, Mammie. I love her.”
That did it.
Akira laughed outright while a blush burned her face to the tips of her ears. Aileen forcefully pulled Andrew off and dropped him to his feet beside her. “Ye can love her from a distance.”
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I’ve heard some editors don’t like children in romance. They say the wee bairns detract from the romance.
Do you agree? Are you sometimes put off by the constant interruptions of children or do you enjoy a lush romance filled with characters both young and old?
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Hope you’ll all check out HIGHLAND DRAGON.
To learn more about Kimberly Killion’s second release, please visit her website:
www.kimberlykillion.com



Hi Kimberly!!
I loved your excerpt! Such a cute scene!
I don’t mind kids in my romance novels. As far back as I can remember, all my favorite authors put them in at one time or another. Kids are great for comic relief and can add good tension! Just like in real life. LOL
Highland Dragon sounds divine! I’m dying for my copy. Anyone know how to hurry up the UPS man??
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Thanks for a tasty teaser, Kimberly! And thanks for hanging with the Mama Writers. Best of luck with your new release!
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Yup! Sure do… get a kindle. *grin*
I can get my copy LICKETY SPLIT. LOL
Hello MamaWriters! I’m so happy to be your guest here today. I love this place. The design is so inviting and fun.
Sarah,
Good morning. Are you the early riser in the group? Being here makes me think about how fortunate I am that my kids are in school. I can hardly remember what it was like to write with them home.
On the subject of kids in books, I recall a young character that kept getting in the way of the hero and heroine getting together intimately. You would think after a time or two they would just tell this boy to shoo, but in this story, the boy was the younger brother of the heroine, AND a ghost.
It was cleverly written. It was Heather Grothaus I believe. I think her second book. Great read by the way.
Twitter: wiremamma
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Kimberly,
I agree–I think the presence of children lends to the story, to the humanity of the characters. I have one of my supporting characters in All or Nothing is a mother–and another is with child. Both give my heroine, RuthAnne, different aspects of love and romance with her hero to think about… helps her imagine him as a father and husband.
Now that I am a mother, it’s harder and harder to write without including the kiddos somehow!
I love your blurb… and the Heather Grothaus story sounds intriguing! what’s spookier than a child-ghost??
~Ashley
Hi Ashley!
I do wonder how many authors write children into thier books and don’t have children. Maybe because they can’t or choose not to. If that were the case, I bet those books really drive home the emotions.
Thanks for stopping by and sharing a bit from your own work. It sounds like a great read. I love characters with double names.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Pregnancy is a whole other ballgame in stories, too… one of my secondary characters in SOMETHING ABOUT HER is pregnant. Writing some of her scenes was particularly difficult because I did it while I was pregnant.
I remember listening to Eloisa James talk at the RWA conference luncheon about putting her fears into her work, and I think I did a little of that then.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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And wow, I’m just finding all sorts of ways to veer off topic, aren’t I? LOL
Welcome Kimberly!!!!
Awesome excerpt, what a cute little guy! I love that line, but I love her, lol! Can’t wait to get my hands on this one. I SOOO loved Her One Desire.
I think kids in romance can be awesome! Why not? Like you said, most of the women reading can relate.
Thanks for hanging with us today!
Waving wildly at Eliza!!!
How are you? Speaking of kids…how’s the new bairn?
She’s awesome!!! Such a little sweetie, and so content. Now the older two… driving me a little insane… lol
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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She’s adorable, too.
Of course she is! She is the baby. She will always be adorable and those older ones just need a lot of love.
I loved Andrew with his little wooden sword and candid observations. What a cutie. Good luck with the book, doll. Looking forward to seeing you on the Best Seller’s List.
Paaaaaat!
Let me tell you ladies something about Gwynlyn. She is the best supporter and author could ever have. I can’t tell you how many times this woman has sung my praises. *Muah* XOXO
Thanks for stopping by and always making me feel worthy of your attention. LOL
Lovely excerpt! It’s hard to portray children authentically and Andrew is a darling.
I’d say for erotic romance or Blaze, I’d agree that I don’t want little ones running about. But a good, rich historical with themes of family and tradition can definitely be enhanced with children in the cast.
I’ve heard some readers say they don’t like children in suspense stories because they constantly worry something bad is going to happen to them. I can totally understand that viewpoint as well!
All good points, Jeannie! I can’t watch scary movies and if the victim is a child, I’m so not going there. And I think you are right about those lines not “allowing” children into the cast. But really, there’s no room for them amidst all those steamy love scene. Hehehe.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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I’m so not a fan of scary movies. LOL Suspensy movies, sure… not a problem. But I haven’t watched a horror movie since I was a kid and saw Poltergeist while my parents were watching it (they didn’t know I was standing in the back of the room, until I screamed at a scary part.). That gave me nightmares for weeks.
Anyway…that was totally off topic. LOL
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Jeannie~
LOL. It’s not *entirely* off topic though. Cuz if you think of…well…okay, it *is* off-topic. But I just have to off-topically say…I’m with you! I’m fine if it couldn’t happen (The Shining) or if it’s suspenseful, like you say (hubby & I have been on a Hitchcock stage lately). But too scary, and I’m out. And gore…no way.
ok…on the “off” topic of scary movies…and kids…
when my daughter was 9 we went to rent a movie. We wanted a chick flick and ended up bringing home “The Ring”. We thought it might be a romance about an engagment ring or something. We started watching it and that girl crawled out of the TV and…OMG! Shiver! We watched it and I think I was more traumatized than my daughter.
OK…I just have to share one more regarding scary stuff. I wrote a book that had an evil character and I’m talking viral, icky, and shiver. OK…you get the picture. I wanted to read something that would put me in the mood to be this woman, so I pick up Scott Smith’s THE RUINS. O.M.G.!!!! Have you read this book??? It is like 600 pages and I read it in 2 days determined to finish during the daylight. I read while I drive from time to time (shhh…don’t tell anyone) and I had to pull over on the interstate because I thought I was going to be ill. Seriously! It was that horrendous.
OK…no more derailing…
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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I’ve never read that…is it suspensy or more like King or Koontz? I know I can’t read Allison Brennan’s books at night. LOL So I imagine this is FARRRR beyond my capabilities.
oh don’t read it! It is sooooo terrifying. Maybe like Steven King’s IT. But it is sooo good at the same time. This guy built his characters and the whole of a 600 page book takes place on a vine-covered ruin.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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OMG, that movie was FREAKY!! When that girl started crawling out of the TV…we saw that in the the theaters, because I too completely misread what it would be about. I thought it would be suspense, but that movie scared the you-know-what out of me!
Yep! My you-know-what and your you-know-what both crawled behind a door and cried. LOL
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Kim~
You know, I usually don’t like little kids in romance, b/c they’re often kinda icky-sweet. And I’m kinda certain that’s partly b/c it’s so hard to communicate the total sweetness of a little child without it sounding all gooey on the page.
But the other reason I generally often don’t like when kids (little kids) are in romance is b/c so often they’re just a plot device. They’re there simply so an h/h can say something, or be something. They have no ‘arc’ on their own, no significance of their own.
But . . . I can’t wait to read yours! LOL Congrats on the K.I.S.S. status for Calin! Can’t wait to read this book.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Kris, I completely agree — a child shouldn’t be tromped onto the page for a plot device. There needs to be a relationship, a solid reason for the child to be in any scene…a reason for the hero/heroine to interact..and most of all, reasons for the child to SAY what he/she says.
I can’t say for certain if lil Andrew has a character arc, but he certainly played a role into Akira’s desire to have children. But I see your point, nonetheless.
While kids are cute, and I do love them… sometimes in stories they can be a distraction. I guess it all depends on the book… it would be hard to write a child into an erotic romance novel. But not so much into some contemporaries and historicals.
For me, I don’t like it when I child comes out just way too cute and sugary sweet.
Ali,
We all know kids are only sugary sweet AFTER the stuff a jelly donut in their mouths and the jam is oozing out. LOL
Thanks for commenting!
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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I enjoy children in a novel as long as there’s a reason for them to be there. I recently read Laura Lee Gurhke’s HIS EVERY KISS. The child is very much a part of the story, it’s a part of the journey for the hero in becoming the father he needs to be. In instances like that, it’s wonderful — especially when the child is written true to form. That means not always sweet or perfect. I mean, from one Mama to another, no matter how cute or sweet or sometimes perfect, they also can be annoying and aggravating! LOL
I have a child in my book SOMETHING ABOUT HER. I’ve heard good things from readers about her (the child’s name is Bethie) so I hope that means I did something right… but it’s always tough to write children, IMO.
Jeannie,
My critique partner always has children in her books, but they are always true to life. You know snarky, talk back, cry, and sometimes you cry along with them and that’s when I know she had done her job well.
I’m a fan of kids in books. One of my favorite historical romance authors, Beverly Jenkins does kids well.
I think children gives you an insight into the hero and heroine. The way they treat them, shows you if they will make good parents.
I’m looking forward to read Kimberly’s book, the little excerpt has me eager to get my copy.
Hey Lashaunda,
I’m glad the excerpt hooked you.
I guess a hero wouldn’t be a hero if he turned out to be a crappy dad. LOL
In the majority of the books I read, the kids don’t show up until the epilogue and that’s aokay with me.
What a great excerpt, Kimberly! I loved Her One Desire and I can’t wait to pick up Highland Dragon
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Like Jeannie, I love children in romance novels as long as they have a reason to be there. There’s nothing sexier than a hero’s devotion to his child.
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Helen~
Now that is VERY true. Good Dad = Sexy Man.
Armenia,
I’m so glad you liked HER ONE DESIRE! Yay! And you are spot on about good dad = great hero, Kris.
YOu all are an active group. I should totally come over here more often…
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Is that a nice way of saying, Boy you ladies talk a lot! ?? LOL
And YES — come back more often!
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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LOL–I hardly EVER have anything to say. Silent as a lamb, that’s me.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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TOTALLY true, Kris. I mean, really, just think of a sexy single guy with bedroom eyes and a killer smile…and then learn that he’s totally devoted to his child. *sigh* Oh yeah…
Or even instances like in the Laura Lee Gurhke book I was reading — he didn’t know he was a father, and it took him some time to come to terms, but when he did, he fell hard for his daughter. It’s sort of like the rake who falls in love…hmm, or am I the only one who loves to read about the fall of the arrogant Ladies Man? LOL
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Yes, totally Jeannie. I like a man to get blind-sided by as much stuff as possible in a romance, LOL. A child to whom he becomes utterly devoted is a very good fall from disgrace.
Lord of Scoundrels had that. I haven’t read LLG–I will tho, at your rec.
Hi Kimberly, nice post and I just loved the excerpt. It made my heart melt.
Writing children into the story can definitely enhance the story and help the reader understand the depth of the hero or heroine’s view to family. Their interactions can say a lot of how the characters will love one another.
I followed you here from your blog, and so glad I did. Thanks to you I discovered another awesome blog.
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Hey Armenia~
So glad you followed Kim over, & we’re super glad you said Hi!
Oops, that last post fell under the wrong spot. Oh well.
Thanks for following me over. I guess all that twittering and acebooking isn’t procrastination afterall. LOL
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Hey Armenia!! Glad to see you here.
And you’re totally right — a man or woman who isn’t willing to put their child first certainly isn’t going to put someone else first. And even if the child isn’t their own, how a character interacts with the child says a lot about where they are in life, on the commitment hamster wheel and more.
What a perfect blog topic. I sometimes have kids in my stories, sometimes not. It all depends upon where my characters are in their journey. Personally, while little kids are cute and can show a lot about the h/h character, I like writing older kids into my historicals. They’re not cute. They’re tough, and they really show a character’s true nature.
So true, Keena!
Teenagers suck both in writing and at home. LOL
JK. I have a 14 year old daughter who started HS this year and her every word hangs on this boy and that boy. But she’s a good kid.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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LMAO! “They’re not cute.”
Oh, I have so much to look forward to when my son hits the Alien Possession years.
Ahhh…I missed that. So that’s what happened to my teenager. She was abducted by aliens. It’s so much clearer now. Heheheheh
I love Characters of all ages in my books and I like to watch them grow whit a series.
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I just wanted to swing back by this morning before I get started and tell you all how much I enjoyed being your guest yesterday. You certainly know how to make a gal feel welcome.
And I’ll add an extra thank you to Kris Kennedy for getting me the gig. *Muah*
Huzzah!
Kimberly
Kids have made me late!
Great excerpt, Kimberley.
Kids in books is something I’ve chatted about with my blog readers. For my 8th book, I had a big baby face on the cover. That was it.
Being elbow deep in nappies at the time, I didn’t think babies on books signified romance to readers, but many readers proved me wrong.
Kids bring out the human side of characters and that’s a good thing.
Love Kids in books- I have three of our own
Hi Kimberly!!
I loved your excerpt! I love reading some romances with kids.