Good morning, Mamas!
Driving home from critique group the other night, I mused on a comment I’d received. One of the ladies mentioned how–reading my pages–she’d settled in and enjoyed my voice: funny, sassy, and rather like reading up on a friend.
First of all—grin—who doesn’t want to hear that, right? A Good critique sends you sailing. Still, I had the constructive criticism knocking about in my sifter, rolling over the nuggets of wisdom to add to my WIP. I returned home at 8:30 pm to all the lights out downstairs. Goody! My hubby got the girls upstairs and ready for bed…CRASH! BOOM! Thunderous footsteps sounded as they charged across the upstairs hall and dove screaming with laughter onto their beds.
Uh-oh. They were getting ready for bed “Daddy Style.” Still, they had teeth brushed, hair combed, and faces washed. But ready for bed? Puh-leeze. Not even close. It took a good half-hour more to get my 3 year old daughter to snoring. My older daughter, almost 5, was properly bribed (with her birthday tomorrow, she’s in a very bribe-able place) to stay in bed.
This got me thinking:
When I get them ready for bed my voice is soft. My tone is smooth. Foreheads get kissed. They say prayers in their sweet, lilting tones. I invent a story for them for the night. They yawn. We rub noses like Eskimos, and out the door I go.
When Daddy puts them to bed—he starts by tickling them. Everyone giggles. They jump from bed to bed, completely riled up, and either:
- I end up with everyone sprawled in my bed
- I do the above ritual anyway.
The point is—as parents—our voices are unique. A writer’s voice is an ethereal thing. When you pick up a book, you like it or you don’t. It sits well with you, or it doesn’t. Unless you have to read something for school, chances are you’ll end up with a stack of unfinished novels on your night table, or reaching for your old standbys; authors who never let you down, because their voice is as familiar to you as your own child’s.
Most of us—I know from reading many of your bios—are Jane Austen fans. We love her voice. How she draws readers into what are now historical regencies, but were actually contemporaries in her day. We cry with her, laugh with her, fall in love with her over and again. In a more contemporary vein, I’ll follow Nora to the Pagan Stone, through the Valley of Silence with vampires, or on just another romantic romp with a sassy heroine and the man she almost misses falling for. It’s her voice. I trust her. She’s not going to leave me in a lurch on page 346. She’ll take me just where I want to go.
So, how do we find our voice? Like our babies, we each must practice as writers. We gurgle and goo, and cliché our way through early tales. We struggle to find our voice, tell our tales, and then—even more importantly—to be willing to share our stories. Whether we share them through the careful review of our critique partners, or ultimately with agents and publishers, share them we must because this is the desire of our hearts. And like our children, we stumble and fall before we get it right.
What’s your take on a writer’s voice? And which authors would you curl up and read, or hurl across the room in disappointment? Everyone who comments’ name goes in a hat tonight – and the birthday girl will draw the winner: A preview copy of By Another Name, by Ashley Ludwig – releasing April 11, 2009



Great post, Ashley! What an excellent way to illustrate how our voices differ. I like to think that my characters have their own voices, but overall I like the entire work to flow effortlessly. I want smooth harmony. I love to read Lewis Carroll. His words are nonsense, but they make so much sense. For romance, I’m a long time fan of Stephanie Laurens. There’s just something about her writing that keeps me coming back for more. I’ll toss any book that fails to keep my attention. However, if it manages to keep it for at least half the book then I will feel compelled to finish.
I just wanted to stop in and say hi. I’ve already got my copy of By Another Name. Yay!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Thanks, Emma! Hope you enjoyed it. We’re big Lewis Carroll fans here, too.
I’ve not read Stephanie Laurens! I’ll have to pick some up! thanks for the tip, and happy writing!
~Ash
Hi Ashley! Great post!
Voice…I still remember learning about this in HS and thinking it was soooo ridiculous
Then again in college…still sort of thinking, what’s the point?
Then when I took on writing as a career…I finally came to terms with the fact that its the most important thing! But I think I knew that all along. In fact, my voice hasn’t changed all that much, what has though is my concept and understanding of it.
When I write, I “hear” literally my “writing” voice or my muse, whoever this woman is, talking in my mind. Its a smooth voice that calms me when I write. But the actually voice and tone of my work is often sensual, witty/sarcastic, entertaining and sometimes even educational.
I’ve hear from a lot of people, including a NY pub that they love my voice. I don’t know why-but I’m glad they do
So to answer your question…writers I LOVE are Ken Follett, Jude Devereu, Julie Garwood, Charlotte Bronte, Jane Austen…and so many more I can’t list them all here. It would literally take me hours. Since I began writing so many “reading” opportunities have arisen for me, and I’ve become a fan of so many more authors that I never would have checked out before, mainly because I would have stayed in my own little circle of tried and true authors.
Now about the 2nd part of the question…I’ve never thought about this. I know I throw books across the room when the plot and characters are weak, but I never thought about their voices. I suppose if I really didn’t like it that much I might never get a taste for their voice.
Btw…my hubby’s bed time routine with the girls:
“Girls–go upstairs and get your pjs on!”
LOL, he does go up and make sure they are actually doing it and tucks them in, but it just cracks me up. I walk upstairs with them hand in hand…
I always think bed time routines are so cute, and wish we had some…but my kids were such horrible sleepers and resist bed time so much that we simply put pjs on, tuck them in kiss them good night, say I love yous and duck out–if we didn’t it would take HOURS!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Eliza! What is it with daddies at bed time? It’s like their brains click off. Sports center goes on. And Dad’s off duty.
I’m with you on the voice in my head telling me the story. That’s when I know I’m in the groove. I think your voice is heard when you are being your most honest.
I grew up on Ken Follett, Jude Devereux – both. Knight in Shining Armor is still one of my all time faves.
I recently had a bad Jodi Picoult experience – where she HAD me until the very last page and a half. Still, though I felt I’d been totally cheated out of my HEA ending – she provoked a response from me. Which, as we know, keeps me talking about the story over and again. SO – even if that drives other readers to pick it up to see what all the buzz is about… that’s a good thing.
Case in point – I’m currently reading Twilight – even though I told myself I wouldn’t. WHY am I reading Twilight? Because I wanted to see what it was about Stephenie Meyer that caused a generation of teenage girls to swoon.
She has a great voice, by the way.
Twitter: violaestrella
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I think you hit the nail on the head, Ashley. Your voice is you. It’s honest and it’s from the heart. After we stop listening to our inner critic and just write, we have our voice.
Great post!!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Viola – thanks for your comment.
*gulp!* The inner critic. She can be BRUTAL with a capital B.
That’s what makes groups like this so important. It’s more than just having something to say – it’s having someone to share it with.
I’ve always been told to write like your mother will never crack open one of your stories. What do you think about that one?
I can only pray that most of you have a mama like I do – she is a wonderful CP – and she’s the voice in my head not only when I’m furiously typing out a scene, but also transforms into a barking drill sgt. who gets me up and away from the computer when my 3 yo appears at my elbow with her sippy cup held out like Oliver Twist – Pweeze mama, can I have some mo?
Thanks for commenting
Great post, Ashley! I love the comparison between the voice of a writer and the voice of a mother. You’ve captured it perfectly. I also have to agree with the lady in your critique group: your writing is funny, sassy, and just plain enjoyable to read.
I’ve already had the opportunity to read By Another Name. Whoever wins it is in for a treat!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Elizabeth!
Coming from you, that’s quite a compliment!!!
Thanks for the kudos, on the post, and By Another Name. I’m glad to have you as my friend and editor. Nice to have you on this side of the fence…
*hugs*
Ashley
Twitter: silverwriter
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Ashley, I believe that one of the hardest things a writer does is discover their own voice. And one of the worst things is when they lose that voice! I also believe that a writer can have more than one voice. Nora Roberts/J. D. Robb for example. She even wrote a book, Remember When, using both voices. I would challenge a reader who didn’t know both authors were the same person, to realize that they were.
I know several authors who use different voices for different types of books, and this makes a lot of sense to me–since I tend to do the same thing, lol.
This is a great post, Ashley. I haven’t banged any books off the wall lately, but then I tend to only buy/read books by authors I already enjoy or come recommended by friends with similar tastes to mine. Two voices I’ve recently discovered that made me sit up and take notice are Maureen Child and Kate Carlisle.
Twitter: wiremamma
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Silver,
As a Nora Roberts junkie – I can attest to the two unique voices comment. personally, while I’ve read a few J.D. Robb titles, they just don’t hold my interest right now. Perhaps I’ll try them again, someday. I did enjoy Remember When a great deal.
I attempted to write under a pseudonym and found my voice didn’t change much. My characters were a bit more *ahem* exhuberent, but MY voice stayed the same.
Thanks for commenting! and have a great day!
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Exhuberent??? ROFL.
Twitter: wiremamma
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Um… yeah. I’ll let you – and ONLY a few of you – know if anything ever comes of that one. This is one my own Mama is NOT allowed to read.
Twitter: wiremamma
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Silver – Rachel chose you as the winner of our little contest. Congratulations!
Send me your e-mail address, and I’ll get you your preview copy of “By Another Name!”
Take a peek at the trailer here:
http://ashleyludwig.wordpress.com/novellas_and_shorts/by_another_name_by_Ashley_ludwig/
Thanks for commenting!
I hate the concept of voice! I hear over and over it’s a hidden theme in one’s work. Then I KNOW my characters each have voices. That’s what made Jane Austen so incredible–her multiple realities. I couldn’t possibly be me when writing. All I can do is echo my inner drum–perspective in theme. The characters sometimes bang said drum for me. Book throwing definitely comes into play when the author forgets to leave the character in character. Although, many other reasons for book throwing do arise.
My husband puts my daughter to sleep in his own way because he’s defiant. He empowers himself and pays the price… a long drawn out bedtime ritual. She just goes right to sleep for me.
Skhye
Twitter: wiremamma
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SKYHE! I knew I’d get you here sooner or later!
This is the perfect forum for you, my friend!
I have a night-shot video of my husband putting DD#1 to bed at age 1 1/2… he was singing her to sleep. She’d yawn. Then he’d tickle her and she’d peal in laughter! then they’d start all over again, until she was positively dancing in his arms!! I’ve gotta get that clip on you tube. HYSTERICAL.
To any of you not familiar – Skhye Moncrief is an awesome, intelligent, exciting writer with TWRP! Check out her free read and it’ll leave you sizzling–and ordering her latest before you know what happened!
Thanks for the waltz down memory lane, Ashley. Why is it Dads think that works at bedtime? You make important points about our voices. The few people who know me very well can hear me in my writing…even when I don’t hear it myself.
Clare
Twitter: wiremamma
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Clare – I think that’s why it seems like such a compliment. My BFF says that she loves finding the nuggets of truth in my stories. LORD knows when we were young and single, we made some memories that continue to find their way into my romances! LOL
Thanks for the comment!
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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You know it’s funny but I ended up becoming good friends with a woman who is a writer…and I loved her books. AFTER I got to know her well, the next book I read, it was almost as if she were standing there, reading it to me, it was SO strongly in her voice, in her tone, and from her heart. But knowing who she is made me see that tone in her books… I imagine that for many of my favorite writers, once you get to know them, you could easily see the words on the page tripping from their tongues just as naturally.
Twitter: jeannieruesch
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Ashley, what a fabulous comparison. Night time with the dad in our house is called Papa Nigh Nigh…my almost three year old gets VERY excited, tiggers his way down the hallway to our bed, where he bounces in place chanting, “Papa nigh nigh! Papa nigh nigh!” because he knows exactly what to expect when that occurs, from the giggles and tickles to the snuggles and good night kisses from Mama.
Voice is to our readers what experiences are to our children — they come to know what to expect, they look forward to it, they TRUST it… and often, you don’t even realize that you’re creating that experience. Because I think just as we naturally interact with our children in a way that is unique to us, when we allow ourselves to be natural as we write, that voice comes through as well.
Great, great post.
Twitter: wiremamma
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Jeannie — I love Papa Nigh Nigh! Memories… I keep saying I’ll lose it the minute DD#2 masters the art of saying “L” sounds instead of “Y” sounds.
You hit upon trust – and that is of the utmost importance. Perhaps that’s why pseudonyms can be so powerful. Enabling a writer to “be” something other than what their readers are used to, without shaking that sacred trust.
Thanks for commenting!
Well Ashely you are right. Daddys way is much more fun and I think the change is good for kids and even adults. I know as adults we do the same “routine” day in and day out. As you know I am very much a routine person and without one I would go crazy but at the end of the day our main focus is getting “ME” time when the kids get to bed. Last night I went to the gym and came home at 8:45 and was hoping that the kids would be in bed fast asleep so my hubby and I could have mommy daddy time. WELLL, when I got home I entered into the world of make believe and the kids were playing in the tents that were made and they had dolls and dinosaurs to keep watch for mommy ( I don’t know if I was the bad guy or what). My first reaction was to be irritated b/c they were behind schedule but then realized that daddy is not here every night for bedtime. The time I have with my children is taken for granted. I guess as adults we get so caught up in what we have to do during our busy day or what we did not get done that we miss what REALLY needs to be done, spending time with our children while they still want us to. Right now is the time to get them to love and trust us in every aspect of our lives and theirs. There is nothing more rewarding than having your kids happy and care free, if only we could take a lesson or two from them. Can you imagine how much happier we would be if for one day, and not a weekend day, to just be a kid?? And I mean not playing like one but being one. Silly stories, hair a mess and not a worry in the world. Good bye worry lines. Our actions are seen but voices heard and this is what sticks with them FOREVER. Plant a good seed now and get a beautiful flower. Keeping a gentle touch on things will benefit our children now and forever. When it comes time for them to raise their children the seed has been planted and will be shared. Great post Ash!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Niki – you are insightful as ever! I know how disconcerting it can be to return to outright chaos! Good for you — for realizing that daddy playtime is precious. EVEN if you have to keep reminding them of that as you’re settling everyone down at 10pm!!!
After all, it’s a great relationship with our daddies that helps little girls grow into strong young women!
Thanks for your post, sweetie! *big hugs*
Twitter: KrisKennedy
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Ashley~
Great post! I love the differences between daddy and mommy interactions–and what a great observation on how they relate to our writer’s Voice.
I love people with strong voices. I read historicals a lot, and so I love that rich historical feel in the authors’ voice, and that can run the gamut from humourous to lush to literary.
Julie Anne Long is one who comes immediately to mind, as I recently re-read her, and also Elizabeth Hoyt. I also love Marsha Canham, although she hasn’t had anything out for awhile.
In less than a year my friend Courtney Milan has her first contribution to a novella coming out (with Mary Balogh) with her debut single title romance January 2010, Proof By Seduction, and I’m pretty sure she’s going to rock the world, b/c her voice is amazing.
On the other hand…there are mega-bestselling authors, contemp or historical, who I just go ‘Meh,” about. And it usually comes down to pace and Voice, as I sit here and think about it.
Great post, Ashley!
Kris
Twitter: wiremamma
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Thank you – Kris! I agree – I get that “Meh – enough of this drivel” feeling – and that’s when the paperback sails into the wall. Or the corner. Or the yard sale box.
I’m looking forward to looking into the authors you suggest! Thanks so much, and congrats to your friend! With a cheerleader like you, she’s bound to succeed!
~Ash
Hi Ashley!
What a great post! Voice is something that is as much a part of you as breathing. And it is also what attracts me to the authors I love the most.
Thanks for the wonderful post!
Renee
Twitter: wiremamma
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I like that – Renee. As much a part of you as breathing…
My voice comes at its most honest when my fingers start flying of their own volition. That’s when I know I’m in the groove.
Hope your day went well! Thinking all the best for you and yours!
~Ash
I really like this post. Great Job!
Our voices as writers are all different in their own way. Like our personalities. Just as gets start to take on their own wonderful personalities, we as writers do the same with our writing voice. I guess I just never really looked at it that way before. Thanks!!
I have a little birthday girl today, she turned 5. sniff.
Twitter: wiremamma
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mine is 5 today, Misty! and talk about developing personalities – she’s already saying things like, “remember, back when I was only 4?”
LOL. Have a great day, and thanks for commenting!
It’s been a busy, busy day, but I finally made it over here! Wonderful post, Ashley. I have several favorite authors, all with unique voices. I write across several genres, and my own voice changes slightly with each, yet still it’s me. As you said in your response to Renee’s comment, my voice comes through loudest when the muse is singing and my fingers are tapping!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Thanks for dropping by, Helen! I think our voice, and our writing is at its most honest when our subconscious goes to work! and that’s when our characters take on lives of their own! who hasn’t sat back, wondering how the heck they got THERE when you plainly were directing them to go somewhere else!
Thanks for commenting, and have a great day!
Twitter: wiremamma
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Well – Thanks everyone for playing along and sharing your thoughts.
Rachel picked the winner — (drumroll, please!)
And, she picked “Silver James”
Congratulations, Silver!
Send me your e-mail address, and I’ll get you your preview copy of “By Another Name!”
Twitter: silverwriter
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Awwww. Thanks, Ashley. Email coming your way momentarily.
Writer’s voice? Hmmm? Still wondering about mine. My first book has just been released by TWRP, and I have wondered: Does a writer’s voice basically stay the same, or does it develop and change as she/he continues to write?
I love to read authors who are witty, sassy, and humorous. But, I want a lot of conflict and a good dose of chemistry between hero/heroine, too. Add a little mystery/suspense, and I call that a best seller. At least in my book. LOL
Twitter: wiremamma
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Laurean, Thanks for your comment! I’ll be bopping over to TWRP to look you up! I think if you read early works of any author, it is much like the stumbling steps of our sweet kiddos.
You can see them in there – but it’s just a shadow of what they are going to become.
Along with my self-proclaimed Nora Roberts & Jude Deveraux addiction – I also love James Rollins action stories – and his early works pale in comparison to what he cranks out these days.
The bones of the voice are his – sure – but his craft has been honed to make his work sing.
Nice to meet you, and glad to have your comment!
Ashley,
Beautiful post. Man the Mamawriters are talented! I loved your analogy of writers’ voices and parents’ voices. I also loved the bit about clicheing our way through early drafts – boy did that hit home (Get it? “Hit home”…). When I write I try to imagine I’m talking to my best friend because that’s my most relaxed and approachable voice.
Thanks for the perspective!
Tiffany
Twitter: wiremamma
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Thanks, Tiffany! I appreciate it… Have a great weekend!
~Ashley
That analogy hits home. That’s exactly how bedtime works at our house. I love to curl up with anything by Nora Roberts or Elizabeth Berg. They do not disappoint! It’s funny how tastes change over time… when I was younger, my list would have been much different.
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